Anyone play bass?

[bassfisher02]

I'm working on a song... i've tabbed the intro and first verse out so far... if you play take a look:

Standard tuning:
G----------------------
D----------------------
A----------------------
E----------------------

x = mute string
~ = bend note
/ = slide up

INTRO
-----------------------------------------------------
----------------------------------------------------- x2
-----------------------------------------------------
--0--0------0--0------00--00------0--0------0--0/--

-----------------------------------------------------
----------------------------------------------------- x3
---------9-11-0-11-9---------------------9-0-11-0-5~
-0-9-11--------------11-9~~~0-9-0-11-0-----------

VERSE I
----------------------------------------------0-3-5-0
-00-3-5-0---------------------------00-3-5-0-------- x2
----------4-3--3-4-00-0-----------01----------------
-------------------------4-3-3-4-0-------------------
.xx........x................x..x.................. ...........x..........x

pay no mind to the [.]'s, i had to put them there for spacing purposes.

thats all i have so far, its a work in progress.

And yes timing is difficult to represent over the internet, so count each [-] as one second.